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cute

cute indeed

i love it

its great

NicKoLa93 responds:

i love you too, you are grat

great

i'm proud o' you

NicKoLa93 responds:

mm... not really, it's my worse so far, anyway you are grat

cool

i like it

NicKoLa93 responds:

well, i drew it for a guitars lover friend, anyway , you are cool

cool

i like it. Alot.

WTF are you trying to pull?

It looks like you just traced this SHIT in photoshop? I hate fuckers who try to pull off that shit as their own!

......

cool

well......

ok, first off, nice colouring job. Alot of the "un-scouted" have trouble with that. 2nd off, with the head, one eye looks to be messed up. Lower than the other. I see you made the sleaves long, and why is that? He's a bassist, no? Bassists tend to expose their hands, but you drew long sleeves, because, you're not good at drawing hands? >:3 Don't think we can't notice. Nice nose job. Thats actually pretty good. For anime figures, the nose is difficult. OK, well, work on drawing hands!

sasori-kun responds:

actually a friend made it for me, but her and i both have trouble drawing hands. and that's his day clothes, the sleeves are much shorter and leather for when they perform.

I like pen too.

Not a bad job, but, I can't help but feel somethings missing.......

Lack of colour

Is what is killing you work. VIBRANT!!! We want VIBRANT!! or some colour theme. No more "just white". Ok? You draw manga you say? Well, (this is just my opinion) your eyes, slightly too big. Needs more of a nose, and well... shading. Shading. Manga artists don't really colour to much, so if you're bad at it, I don't care. You need some shading to finish this up, as well as geting rid of all that white.

Tiffany-Mitsukai responds:

My colouring pencils don't do viberant, and neither does my scanner.
I had the whole thing coloured in blue, but the scanner murdered it. Admittly it was weak to begin with hut the scanner dosn't help.

Meh, I don't use that title anymore. I never liked it much anyway.. Manga is too awesome and I relised I prefar the more americanised stuff anyway.
I avoid those eyes, they don't work for me. The just sorta SPLAT across the face =/

Thanks for the critiques =3
I'll bear them in mind in future. If you know any good brands of coloring pencils it would be appricated, the ones I have a really weak.

If I could make comics for any country, I would make comics for Africa, because they don't have comics over there. What's that, they do? Well god dammit, nevermind.

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