comicretard's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Character Request, "Griffin"]

Kinda plain

where's the punch? Its not cool. Its nothing amazing, don't just submit (poor) character ideas. Its ok, but only sumbit your amazing eye popping work.

Philmiranda responds:

I know it's a little plain, but somebody on Newgrounds asked me to do it, so I thought it was only fair that I post it here.

[Could it be ... ?]

I love it!

Wow! Vivid and in my face! I love it!

Kamikaye responds:

haha :D

[OUSAN*&#RB*B*Yg*G#]

hmmmmm

interesting.

antsorter responds:

thnk u

[dear dan paladin!]

Great work!

Dan Paladin, he rocks! And Dommi-Fresh, you rock too!

dommi-fresh responds:

he certainly does rock.

[Emo Kid]

I like it

Its nothing great, but its a nice little piece!

HypNosE777 responds:

hehe yeah it was allso just a quick little pic i made when i was sitting in school learning about photoshop (like i can't figur out useing that <.<) hehe anyway thanks ^^

[wonder ship]

i love it

its great

NicKoLa93 responds:

i love you too, you are grat

[skull and wings]

great

i'm proud o' you

NicKoLa93 responds:

mm... not really, it's my worse so far, anyway you are grat

[Rock'n Roll]

cool

i like it

NicKoLa93 responds:

well, i drew it for a guitars lover friend, anyway , you are cool

[Ashi Himamura (coloured)]

well......

ok, first off, nice colouring job. Alot of the "un-scouted" have trouble with that. 2nd off, with the head, one eye looks to be messed up. Lower than the other. I see you made the sleaves long, and why is that? He's a bassist, no? Bassists tend to expose their hands, but you drew long sleeves, because, you're not good at drawing hands? >:3 Don't think we can't notice. Nice nose job. Thats actually pretty good. For anime figures, the nose is difficult. OK, well, work on drawing hands!

sasori-kun responds:

actually a friend made it for me, but her and i both have trouble drawing hands. and that's his day clothes, the sleeves are much shorter and leather for when they perform.

[Tiffany Mitsukai ID]

Lack of colour

Is what is killing you work. VIBRANT!!! We want VIBRANT!! or some colour theme. No more "just white". Ok? You draw manga you say? Well, (this is just my opinion) your eyes, slightly too big. Needs more of a nose, and well... shading. Shading. Manga artists don't really colour to much, so if you're bad at it, I don't care. You need some shading to finish this up, as well as geting rid of all that white.

Tiffany-Mitsukai responds:

My colouring pencils don't do viberant, and neither does my scanner.
I had the whole thing coloured in blue, but the scanner murdered it. Admittly it was weak to begin with hut the scanner dosn't help.

Meh, I don't use that title anymore. I never liked it much anyway.. Manga is too awesome and I relised I prefar the more americanised stuff anyway.
I avoid those eyes, they don't work for me. The just sorta SPLAT across the face =/

Thanks for the critiques =3
I'll bear them in mind in future. If you know any good brands of coloring pencils it would be appricated, the ones I have a really weak.